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July 15, 2011 / justinbatalden

Poem

I stare into what
Your soul
Your heart
Your being
I honestly don’t know
What I’m trying to say
That I love
Yes.
That we are perfect
Most likely
That we are done
Never
I never will be through
With you.
To me your beauty
Is impossible To describe
Your beauty is so natural
No words can touch it.
Not even a picture.
Can grab the emotions
That you create.

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  1. TurnJacson / Jul 15 2011 1:34 PM

    Well done!

  2. Jaan Pehchaan / Jul 15 2011 11:54 PM

    Wonderful words on beauty!

    • justinbatalden / Jul 18 2011 2:40 PM

      thank you. if there could ever really be words to describe beauty ha

  3. Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe / Jul 16 2011 7:23 PM

    stunning lines, well done.

    please visit me and submit your poetry with us today.

  4. Aaron Smigielski / Jul 18 2011 5:50 PM

    I love this. Powerful and moving. Well done.

  5. mindlovemisery / Jul 19 2011 6:25 AM

    This is so sweet and so touching!

  6. Ina / Jul 19 2011 12:01 PM

    Now that is a love poem! πŸ™‚

  7. Jingle / Jul 19 2011 12:56 PM

    profound.
    welcome and Happy Rally.

  8. charlesmashburn / Jul 20 2011 12:20 PM

    Wonderful expression of love. Well done!

  9. Life: Between the lines / Jul 20 2011 7:07 PM

    I totally enjoyed the beginning πŸ™‚
    Happy potluck!!!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/07/20/emu/

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