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February 11, 2011 / justinbatalden

an experiment poem, part 1 of 4 of my experiment poems

Foreign World….

This black hole is crushing this world
Nothing more than a utter disappointment
What can a person do
to change a unchanging future?
When does someone
Know when to stop
How does someone live a life of destruction
Can’t we stop this complete falling
or are we all doomed to be crushed
We need to change something
or the black hole will kill us all


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  1. Kendall Sant / Feb 28 2011 11:39 AM

    four part poem???? fuck yeaa!!!

    • justinbatalden / Feb 28 2011 12:26 PM

      4 parts are better than 3. 4 makes everything better like threesome fuck that make it a foursome haha

      • Kendall Sant / Feb 28 2011 1:08 PM

        Well that statement is entirely dependent on the question of who (or what) that 4th party happens to be. Generally speaking though I agree %100 ha ha!

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